Tuesday 18 November 2008

Report by Brandon (2)

Activity: Planning Storyboard

Day: Tuesday

Time: 9:10

Class: Hadas

Year group: Two

My Comments: Today I visited Hadas for the second time. Today they were planning their own Horrid Henry story!!! They were brainstorming and learning how to open and finish a story. They also learnt how to get to the main problem of the story and learnt how to resolve it. They were planning with a story mountain which enabled them to understand the structure of a story!!! They all had brilliant ideas and I don't think that I could make a better plot!!!

Story Plans:

Scarlett H - Name: Horrid Henrys Nits
Plot: Horrid Henry is naughty because Perfect Peter gets alot of presents and Peter is being horrible and then Henry gets Nits but no one cares.

Mia S - Name: Horrid Henry and the Rat
Plot: Horrid Henry puts a Rat on Perfect Peters shoulder and then Perfect Peter screams.
Feelings: Horrid Henry was happy because he saw that Peter was scared.

Taylor M - Name: Horrid Henry goes to the Shops
Plot: Horrid Henry mixes all the shelves up. Horrid Henry then gets told off.

Aliya S - Name: Horrid Henry gets a new football
Plot: Horrid Henry had a new football but it had a hole in it so it burst. Horrid Henry thought he could trade a few comics for some money with Moody Margaret so he could buy a new football.
Feelings: Horrid Henry was really dissapointed because his brand new ball had burst.

1 comment:

Matthew H C 5 @ CT said...

Thats a nice report.it must of been a nice time for you.They must like horrid henrey!